Tuesday, November 28, 2006

Travelogue

TRAINS,
Like the infinite branches of a tree that extend into the sky on a dark sprawled out night, it starts stories that multiply in the heads of everyone who gets a glimpse of the instant it began.
It is a prism that makes every ray go wild and break into a million colours on coming into contact with it.
It celebrates the microcrosm, in its full, brown form.

THE LANDSCAPE:
A quilt with patches of loneliness.
Vacant eyes reflecting sunlight.
The moment I look away thinking, "How lonely he must be";
I know he could be bathing in the warm glow of being one with the world.
Kerala is watery green
Northern Karnataka is sunflower
Gujarat melts into your arms, prying,
trying to know what you have been up to.

THE END
Oh look, how these words have jumped over the end sign!
Off on another trip.

15 Comments:

Blogger Dex said...

Ha ha. The jumping da THE END part was good.
Btw, what's a microcrosm? Like bacteria or somethin?

10:29 AM  
Blogger Nandhu said...

i liked the end. but didnt understand anything else...

3:16 PM  
Blogger rama srinivasan said...

Does it ever end, i wonder? Jumping it is a clever deception but are we really that smart?

10:49 PM  
Blogger seena said...

hey, nandhu. thanks for the very first compliment. I think I am getting there!

2:31 AM  
Blogger seena said...

rama, jumping is the only option we have! and u are good at it

2:31 AM  
Blogger seena said...

kp: m planning to post on a trippy trip very soon!
chi! most of the comments are by me only.

2:36 AM  
Blogger Nandhu said...

chi chi, u are supposed to put them together in one comment...

5:58 AM  
Blogger Beq said...

Nice :)

12:04 AM  
Blogger textmeh said...

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1:49 AM  
Blogger textmeh said...

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1:51 AM  
Blogger textmeh said...

sundar sundar bachchi

1:55 AM  
Blogger textmeh said...

fish man! i give up!
dont get confused by the deleted comments, no obscentiies were removed and you deprived of entertainment...just that i am forever lost in these blog bylanes

1:57 AM  
Blogger textmeh said...

fish ! even viju is not helping 1 and i have ended up creating another blog and am guilty about wasting webspace sheeeesh

2:04 AM  
Blogger textmeh said...

seena! now thanks to attempts at commenting anonymously I have a blank blog to my credit! heh

2:05 AM  
Blogger സത്യവാന്‍ said...

im alone,sitting on my terrace enjoying the fullmoon night,its really touching somewhere..
my bleassings..
go ahead

11:03 AM  

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